Talk:Let's Turn the Lights Out

This is my first story, so uh, let's just say I'm testing to see which one I'm more confortable with. So yah.

I really enjoyed reading this story Agent Rouge Bloodshedder. When I was getting into the story I slowly realized it was based on Operation: Blackout, which makes it quite exciting because of the conveniences of that plot. I really liked the intertwining of the events from Rouge's perspective. I personally liked how the protagonist was a female (I don't see this often) with a believable background, and I liked how you included the character's thoughts and flashbacks that gave nice insight. I definitely felt Rogue's stress throughout the story. The moments of humor were a great addition into an alerting story too (e.g. "Nevermind... I'll drive" said by Rogue and "You understood?" said by Gary).

I say this story deserves high quality article status. If you want to raise it to ultra-quality article status, I'd consider adding some quality images and fine-tuning grammar, tense consistencies, and any imperfect expressions.

Very well done! :)

Perapin

07:44, 8 October 2014 (UTC)