Talk:Liam the Rat
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- Dear gosh. This will take a long time to grammar-fix. --The GREAT and POWERFUL CHIBI! 23:48, 2 August 2011 (UTC)
- I also smell a Marty Stu. If I could, I'd blam this article and rewrite it. --The GREAT and POWERFUL CHIBI! 12:53, 3 August 2011 (UTC)
- I hate it when people write with every word in caps. Why do they do this... Icmer In Nyc I don't understand--why must you torment me all the time with your uneducated statements? You want proof that I did this? Fine. 13:02, 3 August 2011 (UTC)
- I know! It might of been okay on Club Penguin, but it's just annoying here.--The GREAT and POWERFUL CHIBI! 14:03, 3 August 2011 (UTC)
- Mercy. Insane Chibi wasn't lying when she said this article was a brutal mess. I had to copy and paste it into Microsoft Word to lowercase everything and repair the grammar. It was awful and poorly written, and it didn't even mention that since he dropped out of school at nine, he isn't very intelligent. I took some artistic license and decided to note that he was trigger-happy (he seems to zealously crusade against Member intolerance, which I emphasized), and scaled up the fact that he only has the education level of a RL third or fourth grader. Out of respect for the wiki, I kept his cannon-weapon-arm and gun job, but tweaked them to stun and part-time, respectively. His movie passion is his drive, and he's a very optimistic fellow. TOTAL REPAIR TIME: THIRTY TO FORTY FIVE MINUTES! --† TurtleShroom™! Jesus Loves You and Died for You!! † :) :) This camera shot cost more than I made last year.† † DON'T SLAM THE DOOR ON YOUR HOT PIRATE CAPTAIN [1] ―――――――</big> 20:03, 3 August 2011 (UTC)
- Mercy. Insane Chibi wasn't lying when she said this article was a brutal mess. I had to copy and paste it into Microsoft Word to lowercase everything and repair the grammar. It was awful and poorly written, and it didn't even mention that since he dropped out of school at nine, he isn't very intelligent. I took some artistic license and decided to note that he was trigger-happy (he seems to zealously crusade against Member intolerance, which I emphasized), and scaled up the fact that he only has the education level of a RL third or fourth grader. Out of respect for the wiki, I kept his cannon-weapon-arm and gun job, but tweaked them to stun and part-time, respectively. His movie passion is his drive, and he's a very optimistic fellow. TOTAL REPAIR TIME: THIRTY TO FORTY FIVE MINUTES! --† TurtleShroom™! Jesus Loves You and Died for You!! † :) :) This camera shot cost more than I made last year.† † DON'T SLAM THE DOOR ON YOUR HOT PIRATE CAPTAIN [1] ―――――――</big> 20:03, 3 August 2011 (UTC)
- I know! It might of been okay on Club Penguin, but it's just annoying here.--The GREAT and POWERFUL CHIBI! 14:03, 3 August 2011 (UTC)
- I hate it when people write with every word in caps. Why do they do this... Icmer In Nyc I don't understand--why must you torment me all the time with your uneducated statements? You want proof that I did this? Fine. 13:02, 3 August 2011 (UTC)
- I also smell a Marty Stu. If I could, I'd blam this article and rewrite it. --The GREAT and POWERFUL CHIBI! 12:53, 3 August 2011 (UTC)
