Talk:Liberation of Turtly

The Liberation of Turtly is a story in the works, written by me. What is written right now should be considered the early, flawed, stages of this story, and shouldn't be official in the Fanon Universe until otherwise noted. Since you are the fanon community, the builders of this universe, and most of you are more experienced than I, I ask that you point out any flaws (OOC, grammar, punctuation, etc.) you see in the story, along with suggestions on how to fix the problems. I also ask that you send any ideas you may have for the story my way- via my talk page. Please keep in mind that this will be my first story so it will be flawed, although I truly want to make it as accurate as possible for the sake of continuity and whatnot. I thank you all in advance for your ideas, constructive criticism, and support with this project.

--WannaTalk? 07:09, 8 June 2014 (UTC)

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Your story needs an introductory sentence/paragraph to give the jist of what the story is about. -- Bro ^{Talk to me!} 04:33, 9 June 2014 (UTC)

Also, your story should be divided into chapters. -- Bro ^{Talk to me!} 11:57, 9 June 2014 (UTC)