Talk:Revenge of the Fangirls

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STOLEN STORY[edit]

This story was OBVIOUSLY copied directly from Hipengy's story on fanfiction.net:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6138500/1/Revenge_of_the_Fangirls

This story is identical to Hipengy's "Revenge of the Fangirls" only the name "Hipengy" was replaced with "BASE." "BASE," if you seriously thought you could get away with stealing someone else's work, you're an idiot. I suggest you take it down now because the original author has already been made aware of this.

Alexann 03:41, October 8, 2010 (UTC)Alexann


If the original author would like to claim his/her work and keep it on the site, they can do that.

If not, the story will be deleted. Yours Truly, Explorer 767 (HAPPY BIRTHDAY!) View this template 11:59, October 8, 2010 (UTC)

Base is Hipengy, apparently. ([1] [2] [3])

http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/clubchicken/images/b/bf/Basexat.PNG

Blah blah blah, long chat, he wrote both stories on FF.net and is gonna write a spin-off EXCLUSIVELY for this wiki. source xat.com/quiztron DP 14:06, October 8, 2010 (UTC)

BASE claims that it is the opposite. Hipengy ripped-off my work, after I posted it on some other sites.- Base.

Citcxirtcem BAAAAAWW to me! I agree that faith is essential to success in life . . . but I do not accept your definition of faith, i.e. belief in life after death..- Rosalin Franklin. see my 5,676 edits! 18:29, October 8, 2010 (UTC)

Incredible... unbelievable... masterpiece....... WOW.[edit]

My goodness.... I stand in the presence of a literary masterpeice laden with more canonical references and spine-tingling storyline than any three of my tales combined. You sir... or ma'am ...are a master author, and I am awed by your work.

So delicately did you balence the holiness mandate; you just barely eeked by with a PG, even incorporating a nice bruising and some blood in there! So amazingly did you obey the laws of the site, yet gripped us in this enthralling masterpiece!


Nitpicking[edit]

Yes, there are a continuity errors, but if I was to go in and fix them, there'd be little to do. As you are a better storyteller than me on this, I guess I'll advise instead of revise. You mostly made errors on the way CP's economy and apartheid functions.

  • Fanon-wise, we depict CP as a less brutal when it comes to membership. We toned down their apartheid years ago (back when it was slim and not even qualifiable as such) in respect for the game. Now that it has come so far as to visibly and easily segregate all CP residents, we stick to the old membership policies as they were in December of 2007. Membership was once an option to make the game far better, not a compulsion whose alternative is barely able to do anything except watch in jealousy.
    • In this wiki's universe, only the elitist Member Igloos pay member dues to be easily accessible. All residential/neighborhood/subarban areas are allowed to have igloos with furniture and upgrades, but they can't purchase anything made in Club Penguin. In other words, they have to import their wares to CP, as they are shut out of the internal economy.
    • They aren't shut out from the continental trade and markets. They just miss out the local luxuries like CP-brand clothing at the Gift Shop, CP-brand igloos, ect. Of course, CP wares are far better quality than the mainland, but to use them, one must pay dues. Failure to pay dues results in repossession on the day of expiry, and, if the penguin is present, all they carry gets repoed as well.

This happended to my character, who happened to be visiting CP on the day his member dues expired. He lost his CP member vacation home due to repo, and because he himself was there, they swiped everything in his inventory made by CP on CP.

  • There are also special residential servers, where the Dock, Lighthouse, Ski Lodge, and Mine Shack are not present (but everything else is), knocked voer to make room for collosal urban sprawl.
    • CP does not have slums. You can compensate for your character's predicament in that he refuses to submit to "The Man" (or whatever) by buying nothing from the mainland. No furniture, no upgrades, no licenses or permits, no nothing. Just cold snow. To buy from the mainland is to accept CP's gated community and membership dues. Ever the rebel and for the sake of pride, Hipengy has chosen nothing over imports. He will never bow!
    • CP gives all residents a weenie little igloo and novelty items at parties. Import prices from the mainland are double the local economy, making the members an elite class with better and cheaper wares than the unwashed commoners.
  • The fangirl with a taser had to have either built that taser or obtained it from the mainland. CP does not sell weapons and has no standing army, save the volunteer EPF and ninjas.
  • The member money given to CP is, canonically and as stated by the Penguin Times, re-invested into their closed member system. Everyone is non-profit and they recycle their money over and over and over and encourage members to keep buying. The newspaper, written by CP itself, is canonical and thus law. All must obey the canonical law. Canonical decrees state that they also use this to upkeep their buildings and projects, which is why CP could be comepletely independant of Antarctica and still have a thriving, sustainable economy. True, CP's gated-community apartheid could easily belly up if enough members stopped purchasing, but the bubble is held by the ravenous spend-spend-spend of CP's elite.
  • Rockhopper does not have ties to the member's apartheid. RH is, canonically and therefore here, an extremely benovelent and caring philantropist. He would gladly sell all he has to all penguins each time he comes, but he runs into CP municipal law when he does. You see, RH's shop was first set up in CP, and he always sells at CP. Therefore, Rockhopper is counted as a Club Penguin store, and must obey the rules of CP stores. That means he can't sell anything to the Masses. He must either give stuff to the non-members or sell stuff to the elite, like any other shop. Rockhopper was afraid to sail to the mainland and knew the Migrator couldn't handle navigating the coasts like that. Plus, he was raised on Club Penguin and always loved the populace. Even with such draconian regulations, the love of his homeland and admiration of his friends and fans keeps him coming back.
    • It would be character development to do this and I'm never a fan of developing canonical stuff, but I think that Rockhopper personally dislikes the membership policy. I believe that it hurts his big heart to see all of those non-members, as much a crew as the elite, to be deprived of the wares he finds and brings to them every so often simply because of an economic doctrine set by a few unknown and greedy councilmen. He would much rather sell to all.
      • I hold that all famous penguins agree with RH, but they can't do anything about it despite their power and ability to cause a riot. After all, they can be banned just like a normal penguin.
  • You said "soul" in this article. You can't say "soul" in the mainspace, just everywhere else.
  • It would be better for the penguin calling for his murder to call for his deletion.
  • G, RH, and Sensei would feel sympathy for Hipengy and defend him. After all, they are famous and have fangirl issues just as much as Hipengy. Famous penguins have to protect each other, and Hipengy would find solace with any famous penguin. They know how it is. Have you ever wondered why G always has spare labcoats? Fangirls take them, of course!
  • There are minor anatomy errors. Penguins can't make fists, they don't have hands or arms, and when they stash something away, they place it in their player card's inventory or in a clothing pocket, not an invisible pocket on their side.
  • Hipengy's statement that buddy lists are pointless is partially true. In CPFW's universe, Buddy Lists do precisely what they do on CP, except extended to the mainland. Naturally, though, penguins enshrine the Buddy List as the ultimate in friendship. Husbands usually have their wives on there, chicks their parents, business partners one-another, and Masters their co-workers.

Praise[edit]

...-but enough about that! Let's get down to what really matters!

  • FANGIRLS! - YES YES YES! I have always wanted to see the fanaticism given to so many character (from AA to RH to G to Bugzy) played out in literature! You, my good man, have PERFECTLY EXECUTED this literary dream! I love it!
  • CANONICAL!! - Coffee Shop, Card-Jitsu, Pizza Parlor!! So perfectly mentioned, so frequently referenced! How so many have longed for such a thing as this, where CP takes center stage with few frills added!
  • ACTION! - Tasers and beatings and candelit conspiracies, OH YES! They are all within legal grounds, no less!! You could singlehandedly put ANYONE who wants to "Raise the Bar" to rest simply with a link! Who says you can't enthrall your audience with a PG tale?
  • LITERAY ADAPTATION OF A CLASSIC CANONICAL SCENARIO! - Why do they seek revenge? BASE removed them from their buddy list and "broke their heart"! Oh, that's so classic on CP; I can't imagine how many times I have turned down an "ADD ME" to the same results! You executed and transitioned this flawlessly and in ways I could never have done! Despite my nitpicking, you NAILED IT. See, my definition above applies to far more influential creatures, like Explorer, TSP, Willy, or Triskelle. Only a hundred names long, if you are on someone's buddy list, you are supposed to mean a lot to them.
    • Well-connected penguins rarely delete, but your average CP Joe changes it daily. Only a hundred names long, if you are on someone's buddy list, you are supposed to mean a lot to them. Of course, that's only if you use it for intention. Pardon the pun, but your everyday Joe Q. Public penguin uses it mainly to pick up chicks. Heh heh.
  • EXTREME ROMANCE! - Never since Pufflezzz have I seen it played so eloquently! They want revenge for alleged wrongs done to them, manifested in a simple one-hundred line list! They are fanitical and insane in their burning passions, and their revenge and insanity is PRICELESS and fantastic to read!
  • PREFECT GRAMMAR! - It is so refreshing to see someone spell right and use fluent structure! Rarely, if ever, does a new user do that! Thank you, thank you thank you! BASE, you amaze me! I see a PROMOTION your way in the very, very, very near future! You'll be a rollback by mid-November!
  • GRIPPING STORYLINE! - I read it from cover to cover, eagerly depicting every detail in my mind. I was enthralled as if I was reading a real book, entertained as if I held a carbon copy of your tale in my hand. I MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!! DO NOT LEAVE ME HANGING AS I DO!
  • FRESH AND UNIQUE! - There is NOTHING ELSE LIKE THIS on this site! You're new, you're creative, you're on a roll, with pure, unedited, awe-inspiring brilliance! BASE, you may be a key to our next Golden Age! For the sake of this site, write more! Honor us with your presence! I'M SUCH A HUGE FAN!
  • EPIC CHARACTER! I JUST MET YOU AND I AM NOW A COLLOSAL FAN! - Your penguin, BASE, has the rounded and complex persoanlity that deems him worthy, nay, DESERVING of hoardes of nutty fangirls! There's no Mary Sue, no ego inflation! It's only NATURAL for a character that great to have leigons of psychos clinging to him! I'll even help you; I'll take it FURTHER than you planned! BASE, my dear, brilliant man who commands the English language, have I got expansions for you! I plan to have TurtleShroom (penguin), my character, a dictator, a king, a billionaire, a string-puller, a ruler and master of censorship, fall to the floor in awe of your precense, praising your name and humbled by your mere standing there. That's right! Your fans aren't just limited to everyday females with nothing to do! Your fame is continental! The entire Jones family adores your work (whatever it is, I'll assume it's writing), and any one of them would shriek and bow to the floor in BASE's esteemed presence! You're THAT EPIC! It's the least I can do to reward you!
  • GENIUS! MASTERPIECE! INCREDIBLE! - I hope you get it: YOU HAVE A GIFT. Your command of the English language, your oration and epic depiction of stories in the most vivid detail I've seen since the greats of yore (as Triskelle, ZK, PogoPunk), and even rivalling my own lexicon (maybe surpassing), is a gift, and you MUST bless us with MORE.
    • I may be a good writer, but I have huge gaps in my skill. I can't write drama, romance, war, or violence. Even a murder scene, if I wrote it, would have tinges of humor, lightheartedness, or comic relief in it. I'd never swear or put too much of an edge to it, partially because I'm a happy and religious man, and possibly because I am simply incapable of it. I really do envy your skill to write drama and scenes where folks get beaten up. All I can do is shove a nerd into a locker when I write... you can realistically and legitimately beat him to a pulp, break his glasses, and leave him standing there emotionally scarred... like a real bully would. I called out for a man like you back in November 2008, and after nearly two years, I know I've found it. Please, don't leave us.


I stand in awe[edit]

Words can not describe the show you've put on for us in this tale, nor the creativity and brilliance you ooze. I am now your biggest fan and I await any work you participate in. I would be HONORED for my characters to meet you, and I would gladly have them humble themselves in your penguin's presence.

If you decide to go with some fanon-based aspects of CP, such as the Club Penguin Stock Exchange, rest assured that on entering the floor, the economists would part like the Sea of Reeds for Moses, so that you can get to what you want to invest in, exactly as they would for Rockhopper, Aunt Arctic, or any other legend. For BASE is exactly that: a legend.

I am honroed to even be reading your work. Don't let your biggest fan down, BRANCH OUT! KEEP WRITING! LET'S SEE SOME MORE! WHOO!!


--† TurtleShroom™! Jesus Loves You and Died for You!! †  :)  :) Take a cookie. Go ahead; they're not poison. † † Wikia Staff, you brood of vipers, you hypocrites! – – 23:02, October 5, 2010 (UTC)

Hipengy Here...[edit]

Since I've finally managed to get an account, I just wanted to say a quick thanks to the moderator that helped me claim my story back. I know most of you believed it was Base's, but it wasn't. The proof is on Fanfiction.net. Not only do I have a whole other story with the fangirls in it, but my reviewers from that site are also characters in the story. And I'm pretty sure Base never bothered to change my puffle's name...Flipengy. Really, that's enough proof in itself, along with the fact that my story was put up way before his. So if he ever comes along again and changes it, just know that this is my story and if you want to see more from it, look at it on Fanfiction.net because I get along with that site a lot more than I do this one so you can bet I will update it.

Thanks again for understanding. I actually wrote a whole rant just for you, Base, because I was pretty angered. It's on FF...it might tick you off, but just know this: I'm sure you have the ability to make your own story. It really isn't that hard. Just give it a shot if you haven't already and please don't steal others' work in the future.

I edited the story, though I'm still going to look into this. BASE claims you stole it from other sites, so I asked him to provide links. If he doesn't provide links, or the date is earlier compared to the date on your story, then the edits crediting you for the story are official.   http://img188.imageshack.us/img188/1254/lockkey.png  ZoneKill  T C E   05:29, October 9, 2010 (UTC)
BASE confessed; you now have all OOC rights to the story. Do you want to keep it up (it's an awesome story), or do you want it deleted? You can do almost anything you want with it. Yours Truly, Explorer 767 (HAPPY BIRTHDAY!) View this template 12:19, October 9, 2010 (UTC)


Thanks for all your help Explorer. :) And I think I will keep it up...maybe I'll even try to get to know this site a little bit better so I can put my other one up as well. After all, if everyone read my other one, they would get a better appreciation for this one.


Hipengy, I apologize for addressing my praise to the wrong man. BASE has been justly punished for sickening plagerism. Had he done it with carbon copy of paper, he could have been jailed. --† TurtleShroom™! Jesus Loves You and Died for You!! †  :)  :) Take a cookie. Go ahead; they're not poison. † † Wikia Staff, you brood of vipers, you hypocrites! – – 15:08, October 9, 2010 (UTC)

Explorer, I would also like to thank you for your help clearing this mess up! I know Hipengy really appreciates it! -Alexann 21:00, October 9, 2010 (UTC)
Thanks. Yours Truly, Explorer 767 (HAPPY BIRTHDAY!) View this template 17:44, October 10, 2010 (UTC)



I noticed that you EXPANDED IT! WHOOOOOOOO!! I read the new additions and I hope you'll write more! Or, you can hand us the general ploty and some profile/anti-OOC data on each character, and let us write out an alternate edition of your masterpiece. --† TurtleShroom™! Jesus Loves You and Died for You!! †  :)  :) Sannse, don't you want to kiss the seat of my pants? † † Wikia's gone like a freight train, gone like yesterday, gone like a soldier in the Civil War (bang bang), gone like a 1959 Cadillac, it's gone! ――– ―――― 01:07, 8 November 2010 (UTC)

Continuing (and adding) Hipengy's Stories from FanFiction.Net[edit]

Hipengy doesn't want to upload the other chapter of his story "Revenge of the Fangirls" nor does he want to upload his other story here. He basically quit the site due to all he had went through with BASE and this wiki. I wrote him a message asking him if I could upload the other chapter here and fix his characters for him and he said yes so I'll be doing that although I don't own his articles. I just want to help the site in some way so I guess by adding the other chapter and his other story that is 28 chapters long on here would be helpful, and besides, Hipengy is a known user on FF.Net. The stories might attract new users. This is Hipengy's author note (please don't be offended by him, but he really doesn't like this site anymore). In it, he explains why he's going to stop coming here.


"Well, time for another long author's note. ._. Where do I start?

First, thank you all for the support. I'm glad I have such great reviewers. I just might end up having to put more of you in it, but since I already have a bunch of chapters written, you guys would get more minor roles near the end.

Anyways, I'm happy to say that not long after that author's note, Base was banned and his name was taken out of the story and mine was put back in. Still, a lot of the people on that site treated me coldly, because they still believed that it was Base's story, even though I had a ton of evidence and pointed them in the direction of my FF account.

One person stuck their nose up at me and said, "Wow, you wrote a whole author's note about it?" and at the time I was kind of embarrassed and said, "Yeah, I was a little harsh, I'm going to take that down as soon as possible." Then I thought later on, "Y'know what, to heck with it. I think I'll leave it up anyways. It's like I took Base's head and shoved on a stake in front of my house. Plus, it's actually very well-written and I get a laugh out of it." If people really start to bug me about it, I'll take it down, but I kind of like it. The chapter title was really witty too, am I right?

Moving on, I did say that I was going to start putting up my stories on Club Penguin Fanon Wiki, but I've decided not to. Through this whole experience, I learned something about myself: I hate people touching my stories. Not just stealing, but also trying to make it to their liking. I'm open for suggestions, but people on that site started pushing me to change things. First, they were trying to make it suit the rules of the site (it's kind of like a politically correct CP dictatorship. I have a severe hatred for things politically correct. You can't even say the word 'soul.' Seriously? We all have one, why do you deny it? Sorry, I'm starting to rant) so people got on there and edited it. Plus they treat CP like a site while I try to treat it as a real world that Hipengy is in…it makes for better reading...so there's another reason why I clashed with them.

Second, people started trying to change the characters themselves. I made profiles for some of the characters. One guy put in a bunch of fictional stuff about Hipengy interacting with his characters and being a con man, while he's just a mischievous penguin that likes to be player and tick people off—he's not in it for the money at all. I should know this better than anyone considering he's me!

Then he started going on about how I made Lelee too evil and she should really just be innocent and in love, and willing to go to any measures for him. I tried to be polite saying no, but then they started suggesting I write two different versions, one for here, and one for the wiki. Well…that's just a waste of my life, writing two versions of the same story, so I decided to keep it here, where it belongs. If people on the wiki want to read it, they can come here."


Hipengy, Revenge of the Fangirls Chapter 5 Author's Note. ~~Iceflower~~


Well, this is embarrassing.

Take down all Hipengy-related stuff immediately. If anything, I think I've learned something else: THIS WIKI IS DANGEROUSLY ABSORBENT. Anything it touches gets consumed and twisted into shape. I blame the OOC policy (no, this doesn't mean I'm getting rid of it).

Next time, we'll have disclaimers. Really big disclaimers. Yours Truly, Explorer 767 (KIRBY, YOU ARE THE WORST.) v • e 12:22, 20 March 2011 (UTC)

See, we could have gotten another user. Please, just leave the new users alone, no matter how good they may be, TS. Let other people deal with 'em. --Austin8310 Bow ties are COOL. 13:52, 20 March 2011 (UTC)

He is correct. DustyOS almost quit for the same reason, but he plans on doing some more on here. We need to become more friendly to new users, not modify their stuff too much, and just give them some pointers. Hipengy is correct, and I admire him for standing up for the truth. We should try and make those changes immidately.--XTUX345: "May the Bird of Paradise fly up your nose! May an elephant caress you with his toes!" 14:57, 20 March 2011 (UTC)

NOT SO FAST[edit]

I contacted him and got this reply. He wasn't mad at me.

“ Nah, don't worry about it. I was kind of rude ranting about it myself. I told

Iceflower it's okay if she updates it on there and puts up the Chronicles too, but try and keep to its original form as much as possible. I'll drop by the site sometime and read it and check out the feedback if there is any. And if I ever want it deleted, I'll drop you guys a message on here. But for now I'm willing to give it a shot.

-Hip

”
 
— Hipengy!

“ Hmm...well, maybe you could just post Revenge of the Fangirls there and forget

about the Chronicles all together. Or just link both of them to this site. Either one works.

And I'm too busy/lazy to write a guide so I guess alls I can say is just try and stick to his character and you can write stories about him...or me. I'm never sure quite which to say. Because in the Chronicles (I don't know if you read those) I did all of those things so it was me, but while in Revenge of the Fangirls it's more like it was him...whatever, I'll just say him.

That's probably the reason I started ranting so much. Anyways, I went to the forums on here and said people could use my character and half the people on here probably don't know what a keyboard is so if they have the okay then you should be able to go ahead and use him...maybe I'll learn to stop being so critical through all of this.

Just read up on Chronicles and use THAT as your guide, because if anything, that is the Hipengy Bible. Heh.

Also, I enjoyed your little quip. A Base one would be entertaining too. Do you think you could send me a link to the wiki because I remember Iceflower saying you guys moved it or something.

Have fun at worship. I should be at church right now, but unfortunately, I will be spending the next five hours surrounded by idiots in an orchestra room...

Wish me luck,
-Hip

”
 
— Hipengy!


I'll keep in touch and post what I asked when I get to a console that I can view it on.


--† TurtleShroom™! Jesus Loves You and Died for You!! † :) :) STROM THURMOND † † Where are we going, and why am I in this handbasket? ――–――――― 17:36, 20 March 2011 (UTC)

I like how you posted everything I wrote on here....... ._.

You can all relax; I'm not mad and I've got a user on this site again but that doesn't mean you're suddenly going to be seeing articles from me again. Iceflower still has the rights to put them up if she pleases. Turtleshroom, there's no need to apologize, especially since I'm fairly certain this "Hipgengy" fellow doesn't exist. Hehe I'll have to remember that one...

Anyways, sorry for causing so much trouble. I'm glad you guys have made changes and I'm glad this is cleared up.

-Hip

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