User blog:Rocket Slug/Good Beginning For A New Story?

Is this a good beginning for a new story?

It was a warm sunny day. Rocket Slug and Lexi were blowing bubbles outside for fun. Agent Meltie came out talking on her cell phone to Christina.

NOTE: AM and Christina are friends, but not close enough to allow AM into their clique.

"Well, I thought he looked at me." reasoned Agent M.

Rocket Slug grabbed a bubble wand and blew a huge bubble in Agent's hair to make Lexi laugh.

"Hey! I'll wring you neck, you little rodent! Drink puffle bathwater!" exclaimed Agent, trying to get the soap out of her hair. RS backed away slowly until she touched the fence. Lexi grabbed her purse and said awkwardly, "I gotta........go, my mom is making......spaghetti?" she said as she opened the door. Rocket Slug said, "It's fine, just stay." "Okay." Lexi threw down her bag and grabbed a small bubble wand.

"I'm sorry. My little sister is a neck pain. I was about to hurt her, but no biggy now, Christina." said Agent sweetly as she got back on her phone.

RS's face turned red with anger.

"Rocketta, you look like a steamed vegetable, only smarter," said Lexi jokingly.

Rocket Slug punches Agent Meltie, but AM pushes her away with her hand. RS bites her flipper!

"Ouch! How dare you! @#$%^&*(!!!!! For the love of Jimmy, WHY?" Agent Meltie whacks Rocket Slug. "YOU STINK!!!!!" shouted Rocket Slug.

"YOU'RE THE WORST SISTER EVER!!!!! I'LL TRADE YOU FOR PHINEAS!!!!!!!! !@$@$%#$%@$!!!!"

NOTE: On occasion, AM speaks like Mabel.

RS screams and runs in the house. She slams the door and makes sure to lock it.

AM sticks her tongue out the window. RS closes her shades.

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