Talk:Operation Blackout
Swiss, it just isn't fair to delete one entire chapter, Swiss. We should incorporate everyone's ideas, you know. ULSK12 • Talk • Contribs
04:11, 3 February 2013 (UTC)
Yes, but the stuff you added was OOC against Canon and it was making the story too lengthy. You said you wanted to finish the story, so I finished it. --
User:Swiss Ninja
(My Talk Page) 06:13, 3 February 2013 (UTC)
Okay... but I was hoping it would be more exciting... here, Clovis just tricks the military and the USA and Castilla win like that... ULSK12 • Talk • Contribs
06:57, 3 February 2013 (UTC)
Uh, he did. I added that part to the scene where he was storming the SSS HQ. --
User:Swiss Ninja
(My Talk Page) 17:26, 3 February 2013 (UTC)
Oh. Btw, this kinda confuses readers reading An Explosive New Year, because NRG Star appears in a battle near the end, and if someone reads that part about how he first changed like that in O:B, readers are gonna get confused. ULSK12 • Talk • Contribs
23:47, 3 February 2013 (UTC)
You may make changes if necessary but don't change the ending with the Liberation of the Director. I deleted the chapter because it was too lengthy, I didn't know what was going on, and it seemed like it was going off on a tangent away from Canon and simplicity. (Millions of sun rays? That isn't canon, nor does it make any sense, no offence).
I apologise for doing all this with short notice.
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User:Swiss Ninja
(My Talk Page) 00:15, 4 February 2013 (UTC)
Hmmm... how about if Kerboom faces Herbert and causes him to lose his army, resulting in him receiving his Blackout upgrade, a certificate, and a rank up to senior rank in a celebration for his bravery? I think I'll do that right now. ULSK12 • Talk • Contribs
07:04, 6 February 2013 (UTC)