Talk:Reality Check

Plot Twist ideas

I have an idea of a plot twist where one of the survivors is Dark Lorgas in disguise,and Phazon troopers were following them! -Untodarkness2

My idea is that Derek and his puffle somehow survive and find other survivors. They build a colony and try to live. But because their colony is based in a location many other want, they have to fight off other survivors that want to destroy them. They have to battle off aliens and evil penguins. -Feey1

Do you have any concrete idea for the plot? Because it seems like you're just winging it. You'll never finish the story like that.

Find a way to resolve the conflict in the story. Otherwise it'll drag on forever and ever until you end up boring your readers to death.

Also, you're not using servers correctly. There are no "server portals", and there is not one "Residence Server". There are four classes of servers; each class has a different map of CP. Each server is a duplicate of CP, with different penguins on it. Yours Truly, Explorer 767 (GET READY DREAMLAND) v • e 01:23, 3 September 2011 (UTC)

There is one called RCP. And I do admit I am sort of winging the story. But the plan is that 4 penguins and 1 puffle survive and must build a colony. They have to defend against aliens, evil penguins, and more. This whole time they must reproduce and save the penguin race. Plus other people will edit it anyway, so you have to sort of go with it. -Feey1

I agree.Dark Lorgas can be considered the antagonist,as he staged the plane ASPLOSION and the Server Incident. -Untodarkness2

RCP is a layout/map, not a server. The problem with your plot is that there doesn't seem to be a way for the story to end properly. What goal should the protagonists fulfill? Yours Truly, Explorer 767 (GET READY DREAMLAND) v • e 02:01, 3 September 2011 (UTC)

Well read the latest part(Day ????). It shows that they have ended up in a reality error that occurred when the dimensions crashed into one. They have to try and find their way out of it, and back into the real world. All in all they have to survive against evil penguins, more reality errors, and alien survivors(who are some what very dumb and stupid looking). -Feey1

Feey,Agent Lorgus(Who you call Donald) is Lorgas in disguise,obviously.HIS NAME. I'm Different... SPAAAAAAAAAAAAACEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!! 02:36, 3 September 2011 (UTC)

I think you could do this differently and a lot better. First off, focus on the main characters' lives before the server crash (remember, they probably don't know each other). Second, foreshadow the crash with newspaper headlines or something. Third, have them all arrive in CP just before the crash. Maybe you could have some scenes where the server operators notice the computers crashing or something. Once the crash happens, the rest of the story is up to you.

And please read the Server article again. You're still doing it wrong. Yours Truly, Explorer 767 (GET READY DREAMLAND) v • e 12:12, 3 September 2011 (UTC)

Good idea. Progressive Stupidity Mata Nui,the great spirit,allows you to speak to him! 14:37, 3 September 2011 (UTC)

References

I plan to make ALOT of Phineas and Ferb:Across the 2nd Dimension references.There will also be alot of other references that i'm planning. Progressive Stupidity Mata Nui,the great spirit,allows you to speak to him! 23:34, 3 September 2011 (UTC)

I love that movie! I've watched it like 20 times already, and have the soundtrack. Though when I think the land more of a massive wasteland. And when I think about the music to Reality Check, I think of Tron Legacy's music. With these 2 references we could make something really cool. '-Feey1

The parts I make will be Bionicle-y.Also,Dark Lorgas is the antagonist,so the music that plays during the battle with him at the climax will sound like a combo of Metroid,Sonic,and Star Wars music.The song is "Dramatic Finale".It's also known as "The Final Battle:Infinite Realities!" in Japaland.The Japaland name is a reference to many anime episode titles in Japan. I AM MATA NUI! I,Mata Nui,the great spirit,allow you to speak to me! 23:51, 3 September 2011 (UTC)

Also,there will be a group of robots who act like Japaland Schoolgirls.At one point,they both sing and do the vid for Konata's theme song. I AM MATA NUI! I,Mata Nui,the great spirit,allow you to speak to me! 00:09, 4 September 2011 (UTC)

If this is a movie, why are there episodes? Do you want to make this a TV show? Yours Truly, Explorer 767 (STEAL MANY CAKES) v • e 11:55, 4 September 2011 (UTC)

This suits as a film better than a TV show. A whole server-related TV show would be too lengthy, and I'd expect "Reality Check" as a show to flop. Explorer; I think he means to make a story-version/script of the film but is writing Episodes by accident. Or he's writing Episodes purposely. -- ¤ (User page!) (The Fanon Rap, coming very soon!) 13:15, 4 September 2011 (UTC)

The episodes are just sequels to the original movie. I think Star Trek used the same system. There will be many many episodes, all having extreme battles and wars. Episode 2 should be when the alien army attacks. And those aliens are going to look really goofy, and their really really dumb. -Feey1

That would go under Reality Check 2. Reality Check is the article for the first movie; if you're going to write a sequel, put it under a different page.

Also, you do realize that most lengthy film series tend to worsen as time goes on? Yours Truly, Explorer 767 (STEAL MANY CAKES) v • e 16:54, 4 September 2011 (UTC)

Feey1 - that would make what you are doing a series based on the movie ... I don't suggest you do that. It kind of exaggerates the original and great film plot. Scrap the series/Reality Check 2. -- ¤ (User page!) (The Fanon Rap, coming very soon!) 18:44, 4 September 2011 (UTC)

It'll be continued via comic books and video games. I AM MATA NUI! I,Mata Nui,the great spirit,allow you to speak to me! 17:50, 5 September 2011 (UTC)