Talk:Tails6000 and the Ray of Youth

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LOL Aye-Que is finally a TV star! XD

but still if agatha had involvement in the story just to mess with tail's progress, I'd laugh XD but still AYE-QUE IS A TV STAR! :D Tails6000 (THE RED TEAM MARCHES ON!!!!) 02:26, January 2, 2011 (UTC) 00:48, 12 June 2011 (UTC)

I'm glad you liked it. I wanted to make this story sort of comedy centered, seeing as quite a few stories made these days are kinda serious (not to say I don't like serious stories, but I thought this would be a nice change). Also, yes that's probably all the time Aunt Agatha will have in the story. Don't worry, that bath image will NEVER be made into a pic. --Speeddasher A link to a talk page "Lock On"!

good :P and no prob ^^ my race for the gem story is silly and serious :P feel free to fix it up if ya can ^^ I will write chapter 2 soon :) and also, who wins in a battle, a dark wizard (black mage parody) or Tails? I say dark wizard...and black mages are from final fantasy, and since I am making a game called "Last Dream:Tails6000 X" I wanted to make that in :P besides, in that 1 of the aprts has speed using tails as a surfboard in a quicktime event Tails6000 (THE RED TEAM MARCHES ON!!!!) 02:26, January 2, 2011 (UTC) 01:50, 12 June 2011 (UTC)

OH and I got an idea for the next chapter...involving finding a WALLET :P tails was busy getting more food, but he realizes he forgot his wallet, then it shows a silly montage started with "Then tails went on his quest to find his wallet" :P and then returns to the place and pays for it XD Tails6000 (THE RED TEAM MARCHES ON!!!!) 02:26, January 2, 2011 (UTC) 01:28, 9 July 2011 (UTC)

Cool idea. I'll add that after the fight with Cyber Tails ends. --Speeddasher A link to a talk page "Lock On"!

thanks, was inspired by a silly mario flash cartoon called Mario and the Hat of Fire. Tails6000 (THE RED TEAM MARCHES ON!!!!) 02:26, January 2, 2011 (UTC) 15:58, 9 July 2011 (UTC)

interesting katana technique...good thing he ain't emo though, or else tails would've caught-

Tails: the...emo

Speed: the what?

Tails: THE. EMOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! *runs around stupidly* Tails6000 (THE RED TEAM MARCHES ON!!!!) 02:26, January 2, 2011 (UTC) 02:31, 25 July 2011 (UTC)

Hey speed, will chapter 5 have the quest to find his wallet? :P I can write that if ya want me too :P Tails6000 (THE RED TEAM MARCHES ON!!!!) 02:26, January 2, 2011 (UTC) 04:58, 2 August 2011 (UTC)

Yes, this will be the chapter that has it. I have the idea that Tails drops his wallet and it falls down to the lower deck, so then they have to go find it. I wanted to have several things happen on their way to Ayetropolis instead of having them get there right away. --Speeddasher A link to a talk page "Lock On"!

I dunno why, but this story is hilarious. Great writing.--Austin8310 Bow ties are COOL. 15:43, 2 August 2011 (UTC)

Thanks. I'm going to continue writing it, and it's going to be a long story. --Speeddasher A link to a talk page "Lock On"!

sweet! :D can;t wait, and BTW I can;t wait to see the silly montage of "through the upper deck for his wallet,through the storage room for his wallet,etc. :P) Tails6000 (THE RED TEAM MARCHES ON!!!!) 02:26, January 2, 2011 (UTC) 20:32, 2 August 2011 (UTC)

GOING TO THE SEA I SEE?[edit]

  • Can you use David Jones and his powers? PLEASE?! He can extend life by thirteen, reduce lifespans by thirteen, minor teleportaion and levitaion, and bind folks to oath. Most key top your tale, David can also raise any (non-living) item from the ocean. --† TurtleShroom™! Jesus Loves You and Died for You!! † :) :) BALANCED BUDGET AMENDMENT PASSES THE HOUSE† † -BUT HARRY REID IS BRAIN DEAD! [1] ―――――――</big> 00:51, 3 August 2011 (UTC)

    • Sure. He can assist Tails in fighting Yoki (who's actually much more powerful than he looks). --Speeddasher Nobody likes you Ash!
      • One problem. David Jones never fights. He's a pacifist that puts Gary to shame. (His crew tends to do it for him.)
“ David doesn't usually get angry. In fact, when he's double-crossed or betrayed, he usually runs off and weeps. (His crew then goes after whoever ruined their captain's day. It is VERY painful.) This isn't because David is weak, but rather, because he doesn't believe in revenge, nor fighting.

Unlike a lot of his family, David is slow to anger and even slower to retaliation. This makes the immortal penguin vulnerable to would-be attackers and con-artists looking to exploit his powers. 		”
 
— David Jones article

I do have an explanation for those questions. David was sailing on his cruise ship and spotted the Siren's Ship. He sensed that it had many ghosts in it so he went to retrieve them. When he went to the lower deck, he was caught by Yoki who easily overpowered him. Though he absolutely hated to do it, David tried to use his powers to defeat the Kappa, but the creature then used the Ocarina of Lassitude to make him unable to move. He then used a special jar he has known as "The Jar of Containment", which when opened can fit any object no matter how big or small into it. There will be an explanation on how these to objects came to be. Also, using David to return Tails to his original age isn't a bad idea. I might actually use that. --Speeddasher A link to a talk page "Lock On"!

About the blood censorship...[edit]

  • As far as censoring the "polishing katana scene" I don't mind, but I don't know why it needs to be censored. It wasn't really meant to be gory, and if anything was more of a stab at companies who unnecessarily censor anime. I don't mind if you censor it, but I don't see what was so wrong with it. Also please don't remove the Dark Blood attack. The Death Code clearly says that blood can be used as long as it's not in vast amounts. Just keep in mind, this isn't the last time that something slightly controversial will be used in this story. ---Speeddasher Nobody likes you Ash!
    • As a fan of censorship, I don't really see 4-Kids as a villain. Don't worry, I won't be cutting- heh heh, emoist pun -the "Dark Blood" attack. That attack was a neccesary part of the plot, and cutting it would damage the story as a whole. (That, and the emoguin gag was too good to pass up.) The Hays Code (considered the "golden rules" of censorship) specifically say that controversial and normally banned items can be invoked if (and only if) they are absolutely neccesary to the plot. It also says that a story must, at all times, "portray right as right and wrong as wrong, and give a sense that good triumphs". You're perfectly in the clear. ;)
    • I look forward to seeing how this tale unfolds. Even more so, I can't wait until I can write some stuff about David Jones in there!!
    • --† TurtleShroom™! Jesus Loves You and Died for You!! † :) :) This camera shot cost more than I made last year.† † DON'T SLAM THE DOOR ON YOUR HOT PIRATE CAPTAIN [1] ―――――――</big> 21:08, 4 August 2011 (UTC)

TS, please don't edit Cyber Tails killing the cashier. I did it to show that Cyber Tails is merciless, so that it'd show off his power. It perfectly follows the That's Death Code (the death was quick, there was no gore, and I've seen darker deaths in G rated movies). By the way, I don't get why you're upset about this scene as this isn't even the most violent part in the story. If you didn't notice, Cyber Tails shocked Tails with multiple volts of electricity, and broke several of his ribs. The torture lasted for some time, and Tails almost died. When you look at it that way, the scene with the turtle being killed is kinda tame. So technically you can't edit it back, because I clearly have followed the COC with this. Case Closed. --Speeddasher A link to a talk page "Lock On"!

P.S. I don't mind you editing the story {infact I actually like a lot of the edits you've made, and I thank you for them), but if you don't like characters dying, then perhaps you shouldn't read this, because I can tell you this will not be the last time a character dies in the story. --Speeddasher A link to a talk page "Lock On"!

There's something that's honestly surprised me about this story. Out of all the things to be censored in it, I was honestly expecting Mayor McFlapp's scene when he's gushing over all the female terns to be censored. --Speeddasher A link to a talk page "Lock On"!

Hey speed I had an idea :P maybe if buster is somewhat ineffective, could we try plan B (as in, his 2 main weapons from the old decade the slingshot and hot sauce gun :D) Tails6000 (THE RED TEAM MARCHES ON!!!!) 02:26, January 2, 2011 (UTC) 17:39, 5 September 2011 (UTC)

Possibly, but due to how powerful Yoki is at the moment, I don't know if it'd do much good. The fight actually isn't going to last that long, seeing as this is the last chapter in Yoki's story arc, but I'll try and fit his two weapons in the story somehow. I'm dividing this story into separate arcs, which each will fit together into the main plot. If anyone has a villain they'd like to see appear in the story, feel free to leave a comment. --Speeddasher A link to a talk page "Lock On"!

cool ^^ I can;t wait to see him use his old friends (the weapons XD) Tails6000 (THE RED TEAM MARCHES ON!!!!) 02:26, January 2, 2011 (UTC) 18:50, 5 September 2011 (UTC)

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