Talk:The FCG Series: The Funny Sunny Summer Solstice

We need to increase the speed of the editing as quick as we can! -- It's SlidurCP! "Groundhog Day iiss for PIWWGS. SlidurCP 14:38, 8 September 2013 (UTC)

My Part

I have an idea for my part.

(scene starts with everyone buying fuel for some reason.) Osheco:CRASH LANDING!HELP! Others:errrr.... Osheco:(takes out construction hat)Hmmm...HEy can I take all your fuel for my new jetpack. (Someone):uh n- Osheco:OR I SHALL TORTURE YOU! (Pulls OUt Chainsaw and katana) Everyone:AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! Osheco:you asked for it! (puts katana by chainsaw to make that worse noise) Dave:(Tries to hit moving osheco with bat) Fooly:YAi!Moozik! (Breakdances) Osheco:Wait i can buy some right here. (Buys fuel and puts on construction hat) BLASTOFF! Osheco (In midair):How did I crash and blastoff without breaking the roof? --Osheco (DIS MAH PAYJ) but visit mah talk 2 (talk) 08:34, 11 September 2013 (UTC)

Rewrite it in proper grammar. Why would the FCG have jet fuel? Why would Osheco attack them for it? Answer those questions and perhaps we could add it in

Nicktang10 (my talk page) 12:17, 11 September 2013 (UTC)

rewrite.we'll see..I'll do it.Dunno.Maybe they wanna take an air tour but the pilot is busy with repairing another plane and refuelling all of them.THey get the fuel to speed things up.osheco doesn't realise that planes and jetpacks use different fuel.He also escaped the psychiatrist 399 times and injured him 88 times while leaving.

--Osheco (DIS MAH PAYJ) but visit mah talk 2 (talk) 05:55, 12 September 2013 (UTC) PS-how do you line everything up? like in the story?--Osheco (DIS MAH PAYJ) but visit mah talk 2 (talk) 05:56, 12 September 2013 (UTC)

This story is just the worst ever Fanon story special i have ever seen. --Best Wishes, Penstubal Rules are for fools! Rules are for fools! Save your stupid rulin' for fools that need a schoolin'! 17:08, 14 September 2013 (UTC)

Why is this in my section.--Osheco (DIS MAH PAYJ) but visit mah talk 2 (talk) 07:13, 18 September 2013 (UTC)

Oh dear god

I must agree with Penstubal on this one. This is the worst story I have ever seen on Fanon. Even Swiss can't improve it. -- Bro ^{Talk to me!} 17:10, 14 September 2013 (UTC)

Rewrite the WHOLE thing. Okay, maybe not. But still, you get the point. The parts written by some of the more experienced users were okay, but the rest is just terrible. Further more, it's September. This special is way overdue. Should we delete and focus on the Halloween special (due to the lack of active character-users in the FCG)? -- Nicktang10 (my talk page) 09:54, 15 September 2013 (UTC)

Gaaaaah scrap the original plot! I have nothing against it but someone PLEASE fix this! I can't even understand the plot!--Rogue's on it! I don't need rescuing. 11:37, 18 September 2013 (UTC)

I like it!--Osheco (DIS MAH PAYJ) but visit mah talk 2 (talk) 07:12, 18 September 2013 (UTC)

Delete this story

This story is terrible. I expected it to be like the other specials, but this is a disgrace for the first FCG Series episode! Vote here if you want it to be removed. After enough votes, the article will be deleted. --Best Wishes, Penstubal Rules are for fools! Rules are for fools! Save your stupid rulin' for fools that need a schoolin'! 18:49, 19 September 2013 (UTC)

For

• --Best Wishes, Penstubal Rules are for fools! Rules are for fools! Save your stupid rulin' for fools that need a schoolin'! 18:49, 19 September 2013 (UTC)
• -- Bro ^{Talk to me!} 18:50, 19 September 2013 (UTC)
• --not amigopen 22:02, 19 September 2013 (UTC)
• Um ok.can i add it to my userspace as the first story i edited.Please.Pretty please.--Osheco (DIS MAH PAYJ) but visit mah talk 2 (talk) 03:43, 23 September 2013 (UTC)
• --Rogue's on it! I don't need rescuing. 03:46, 23 September 2013 (UTC)
• -- Nicktang10 (my talk page) 09:22, 23 September 2013 (UTC)
• --Click here or here!!! Oh, and this is Fooly8. Yay!!! :D 21:31, 26 September 2013 (UTC)

Comments

• I'm sorry guys, it's just this is impossible to improve. --Best Wishes, Penstubal "Why cant i just be like everybody else?" 18:52, 19 September 2013 (UTC)
• I agree. This FCG adventure was a disappointment. I hope the next one will be better. If you want to contribute to it, go to A Time for Pie!. It's organized this time. --not amigopen 22:04, 19 September 2013 (UTC)
• I read the first 20 lines, and I almost wanted to punch myself in the face; it's THAT bad. -- Bro ^{Talk to me!} 22:42, 19 September 2013 (UTC)
• I like it,but suggesting i like all flop hindi movies,i support deletion.--Osheco (DIS MAH PAYJ) but visit mah talk 2 (talk) 03:44, 23 September 2013 (UTC)
• I don't understand the plot at all. Too much madness.--Rogue's on it! I don't need rescuing. 03:46, 23 September 2013 (UTC)
• I has an idea about the sun disappearing, but it got too confusing when Dave showed up... Sorry. --Click here or here!!! Oh, and this is Fooly8. Yay!!! :D 21:31, 26 September 2013 (UTC)

I'm remaking it.

This story needs to be rebooted. Fixed up, polished, all that good stuff. THIS IS UNDER MY PROTECTION! --Dave33333 all hail To the epic king. 17:40, 22 April 2015 (UTC)

DUDE

Bro, I learned more, grammar, storytelling, you can't do this! --Dave33333 all hail To the epic king. 22:02, 22 April 2015 (UTC)

Maybe you can help contribute to the Fanon Characters Special 2015.

You know what...

I'm taking this to Swiss, Kirby, and CK. I'm having this unlocked! --Dave33333 all hail To the epic king. 16:11, 4 May 2015 (UTC)