Talk:Vincenzo/Future

Largest Mary sue I have ever seen. -- Penstubal Forever Serbian! 09:55, 24 November 2013 (UTC)

Can't make the Entity of Darkness weak you know. I tried to implement the strictest regulations on his powers in his third form. If you have any suggestions, gimme feedback. --His Majesty Slenderman the White King (talk) 10:03, 24 November 2013 (UTC)

This is incredibly OP and Mary Sue. Have you learned nothing? --User:EDFan12345 ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) 12:01, 24 November 2013 (UTC)

Ok, I'll try making it less OP. --His Majesty Slenderman the White King (talk) 12:31, 24 November 2013 (UTC)

Ok

Um, a few problems I see with this article are:

• Humans aren't supposed to be mentioned too much on fanon- so i'm assuming humanoids aren't either.

• Plus, a penguin isn't just gonna transform into a humanoid lifeform.

Vince isn't a REAL humanoid. It's his appearance that got messed up. He could be counted as a High Penguin by descent. --His Majesty Slenderman the White King (talk) 12:28, 24 November 2013 (UTC)

It's Sith Alchemy baby. --His Majesty Slenderman the White King (talk) 12:28, 24 November 2013 (UTC)

• You wouldn't just "meet up with swiss". In certain cases sith are friendly and allied with each other such as the old days of the Sith Empire(s). However, swiss believes in the sith "Rule of two", stating that there can only be two sith. Needless to say, you're not one of his two (at that time it'd probably be him and Feey3), so he'd want you dead.

K. I'll make it that Vince wanted to show off his power. --His Majesty Slenderman the White King (talk) 12:28, 24 November 2013 (UTC)

• "Vince absorbed the Amulet and became even more powerful than before - the literal entity of the Dark Side." Really? You absorbed some random amulet and became the literal entity of the dark side. Really?

Ok maybe that's OOC. I'll adjust to it too. --His Majesty Slenderman the White King (talk) 12:28, 24 November 2013 (UTC)

• Dark Fire Ninjas.

It's a faction of Fire Ninjas created by Vince. --His Majesty Slenderman the White King (talk) 12:28, 24 November 2013 (UTC)

• Major OOC problem: Shops, nor the SIA exist in 2031.

• Shops Island is rendered uninhabitable for the most part, and the country is disestablished. Freezestonia, Moon Island, etc. all go back to their own sovereignties again and Shops' moon colony becomes the first nation completely located on the moon (the people there basically build a new nation). The rest of the population that lived on Shops Island that don't move to those other nations immigrate to countries like the US.
• With that the jedi temple is also moved: to what country, idk yet (whatever country I decide to move to). It'd probably be the US or one of the former shops states (such as Freezestonia or Moon Island; actually moon island sounds pretty good due to it being peaceful and such), but that's besides the point. Although the jedi were exposed during the civil war after the move they went back into hiding again for the most part, due to controversies sparking across antarctica at that time about the opinions on jedi and sith. Many nations said that jedi (or sith) found would be prosecuted and punished (due to the government's fear of them), while others said they'd be a safe-haven for any proclaimed peace-keepers (although all nations said that sith better stay out).

Ok I'll adjust to this changes. Nobody told me before, but since you did now, it'll be easier to write this. --His Majesty Slenderman the White King (talk) 12:28, 24 November 2013 (UTC)

• Back on topic; TARKIN? General TARKIN? OOC. Btw, why wouldn't vince just get on a spaceship back to antarctica? :/

• And on another major note, even if I did launch my bedroom into outer space with you in it (which is soooo ooc), There's no way you'd be able to breath, even if you are the "entity of the dark side", because if you were that all-powerful where you're (and I quote) "immortal" and "invulnerable", then you'd be able to take over antarctica. :|

It's just a name. Deal with it. --His Majesty Slenderman the White King (talk) 12:28, 24 November 2013 (UTC)

P.S. ED you edit conflicted me lol :p WannaTalk? 12:06, 24 November 2013 (UTC)

Why wouldn't Vince just get on a spaceship back to Antarctica? That's what I call a really good question. NVM it's a surprise that you'll get later. --His Majesty Slenderman the White King (talk) 12:31, 24 November 2013 (UTC)

I agree with you CK. Slender, you slighlty improved and yet you again wen't back to emperor style. Stop it. Plus, Shops was disestabilished 2026. It cannot be habited once again. Second, humans aren't allowed in the Antarctic. -- Penstubal Forever Serbian! 12:10, 24 November 2013 (UTC)

K. And I specifically didn't mention human. Nobody knew his true form, first of all. Next, he's in outer space when Vince is a humanoid. --His Majesty Slenderman the White King (talk) 12:23, 24 November 2013 (UTC)

Fix it, then

I love how you just explain everything, instead of fixing them. This is still OP and Mary Sue, no matter how much you explain it. --User:EDFan12345 ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) 12:30, 24 November 2013 (UTC)

I agree. -- Penstubal Forever Serbian! 12:32, 24 November 2013 (UTC)

Fixing needs time. You'll see the changes soon. BTW, I'll put this to a halt too. --His Majesty Slenderman the White King (talk) 12:34, 24 November 2013 (UTC)

It is now fixed. Check it out now. If there's other problems, don't hesitate to tell me. --His Majesty Slenderman the White King (talk) 12:42, 24 November 2013 (UTC)

Are...
Are you serious?
You barely changed anything! --User:EDFan12345 ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) 12:44, 24 November 2013 (UTC)

I adjusted to Penquino's demands. As for the abilities, I'll see if I could change it, although I doubt that there will be a major change seeing that Vince absorbed from so many artifacts. --His Majesty Slenderman the White King (talk) 12:46, 24 November 2013 (UTC)

You're literally okay with keeping him a Mary Sue. --User:EDFan12345 ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) 12:47, 24 November 2013 (UTC)

Penstubal, Ed, stop hammering the poor guy. Didn't you see why he can't de-OP vince? If not, i'll bring it back for you in quotes:

“As for the abilities, I'll see if I could change it, although I doubt that there will be a major change seeing that Vince absorbed from so many artifacts.”
~ Slender

SEE? He can't change vince's ruler-of-the-universe level power because vince absorbed so many powerful artifacts! So, as I suggested before, stop hammering the poor guy; he's doing the best he can to restrict vince's raw power! WannaTalk? 12:52, 24 November 2013 (UTC)

k :3 --User:EDFan12345 ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) 12:53, 24 November 2013 (UTC)

K thanks CK. ED & Pen, I'll try to do more restrictions. And also, Amigopen's article Natashi has more powers than me. --His Majesty Slenderman the White King (talk) 12:54, 24 November 2013 (UTC)

I don't agree with you, CK! Stop being so "oooh this will hurt his feeelings stoop" and "nooo let the little guy gooo". Its annoying and sick. -- Penstubal Forever Serbian! 12:56, 24 November 2013 (UTC)

You guys realize he's making fun of the article, right? --User:EDFan12345 ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) 12:57, 24 November 2013 (UTC)

Oh, no i didn't... -- Penstubal Forever Serbian! 13:00, 24 November 2013 (UTC)

Lol pen. Didn't you see my giant complaint section above? Why would I go from that to "oh nevermind Vince being able to take over the universe is cool bro". Lrn2sarcasm  :p WannaTalk? 13:09, 24 November 2013 (UTC)

I dunno, but seeing that Natashi could have so many powers, it's kinda obvious that you are treating me slightly unfairly. BTW, I just added a Weakness section. --His Majesty Slenderman the White King (talk) 13:04, 24 November 2013 (UTC)

It's not unfair slender. You can't literally have someone with all of these powers that could literally take over the universe- an Op supersith that absorbed artifacts to make him the embodiment of the dark side. Natashi might have powers, but she doesn't seek to use them for evil, nor does she have the personality to take over the world even if the powers would allow her to do so. WannaTalk? 13:09, 24 November 2013 (UTC)

Vince won't take over Antarctica, I swear that. Well, not with his powers at least. (Know how many soldiers he had to slay? He would be so tired that even a Mwa Mwa Penguin could kill him) --His Majesty Slenderman the White King (talk) 13:11, 24 November 2013 (UTC)

Would you stop explaining for once and actually do something about Vince? YOU FIRST START WRITING SOME WEAKNESSES, THAT'S FINE, BUT THEN AFTER WRITTING HALF OF A SENTENCE YOU GO TO "but he can kill defeat a million people at once" OR SOMETHING (I KNOW IT DOESN'T SAY IN ARTICLE BUT IM TAKING AS EXAMPLE)! -- Penstubal Forever Serbian! 13:15, 24 November 2013 (UTC)

K. Done. "but he can kill defeat lots of people at once"-related parts removed. --His Majesty Slenderman the White King (talk) 13:21, 24 November 2013 (UTC)

Hey guys

Look, I did the strictest limits I could on his powers. Now, if we really want to make him less OP, we need to focus on his defeats and weaknesses. --His Majesty Slenderman the White King (talk) 13:14, 24 November 2013 (UTC)

LOL WE? No, you! -- Penstubal Forever Serbian! 13:22, 24 November 2013 (UTC)

K whatever. Also, I replied to people first before doing something on an article. --His Majesty Slenderman the White King (talk) 13:23, 24 November 2013 (UTC)

PS:You can help me by suggesting some weaknesses you know. --His Majesty Slenderman the White King (talk) 13:23, 24 November 2013 (UTC)

You could start by removing all mentions of Shops Island (due to OOC), and for sure remove all mentions of "absorbing sith artifacts and becoming the embodiment of the dark side". That might help a little bit with the OP. WannaTalk? 13:27, 24 November 2013 (UTC)

Also just to let you know; no sith alchemy on fanon plz. I don't want weird sith witches. I'm sure bro, swiss and ed would agree with me on that. WannaTalk? 13:27, 24 November 2013 (UTC)

1. Mentions of Shops? All removed.
2. Sith Alchemy is actually mad scientist experiments in case you realize
3. Entity of Darkness thingy? I intend for that.

--His Majesty Slenderman the White King (talk) 13:29, 24 November 2013 (UTC)

Ideas

I got some ideas!

• Make Vince more powerful by giving him every powers than existed.
• Let Vince kill Swiss Ninja and Feey3
• Let him conquer Antarctica.
• Vince shall be a zillionaire!
• Vince should build a Death Star (spoilers)
• Vince should be a Class 7 Fourth Wall breaker.
• Vince should the sole Master of the Universe.
• Vince shall be the sole Guardian of the Universe.

PS:In case you don't realize, I am just trolling.

--His Majesty Slenderman the White King (talk) 13:33, 24 November 2013 (UTC)